My feedback from the movie St. Elmo’s Fire

13 12 2007

There were two powerful quotes that I liked throughout the movie. The main quote that stood out for me was “College is like a four year delusion to keep reality out.”

This quote is trying to say that what you learn in college should prepare you for the future. The truth is they keep the reality stuff out. College doesn’t prepare for certain reality consequences. Like if you can’t find the job that you went to school for, they won’t hire you, or its just not for you. Whatever you go to school for is never certain of what you’ll become, Just make sure its the job for you or have a backup plan for the side incase it dosen’t go your way.

 The other quote that I thought was meaningful was “Sex is not love.” I know that everyone has a different perspective on this type of subject. To me sex is just lust or the physical attraction. Love is a more meaningful word. Love takes time to develope it dosen’t happen overnight. It takes time to develope a relationship and develope the word love. I know for some people sex is a very meaningful moment for some peoples life, but it all depends on the person you are and what you belief. In other words I do believe what that quote says.”Sex is not love” but love is different towards other peoples eyes.



Final Exam Preparation

10 12 2007

Classification: Traveling By Plane

There is Security, luggage, and delay when traveling by plane. Not remember the little things can be real big to yourself and others.

Cause/Effect: Learning to Travel

I never really knew what was traveling was like until I was in Upward Bound.

Persuasive: The fears that Some People Have

Everyone has a fear about traveling if its not by plane, its by car. So, is traveling worth the risk?



My Challenging Semester

10 12 2007

Priscilla Carlson

Reflective Essay

My Challenging Semester

12-11-07

Comp 1106

Comparison/Contrast

            During this past semester it has been a challenged. Coming from Writing One and Two, I wasn’t quite sure to expect. But I did know what kind of teacher to expect. I knew he was funny guy, his expectations, and what kind of teacher he is. What I knew to expect was his grading, homework, and what his role is in the classroom.

            One homework assignment that was challenging for me was writing the persuasive essay. It wasn’t hard to pick a movie that every college student should see. The movie I picked was Supersize Me, the only reason I picked this movie was because we could all learn to eat better, after watching this movie. What was hard about this subject was to have enough information to write about throughout the essay, and to have an opposition side to the essay too. See I am a person that doesn’t like to argue with anyone. I enjoy listening to your point of view, but if I have something to say I will tell you about my opinion.

            During all of the essays we’ve wrote I’ve notice a few errors that I need to work on. Throughout the essays, I’ve notice that I am rusty on comma splices and deciding on which words go where. One big error that I need to work on is my past tense words, and how I like to repeat the same words over. The last and major error that I need to improve on is deciding which paragraph should leave the essay, and keep in mind am I explaining enough information for the reader to understand what I am trying to say.

            One major role that helped my essays was the peer reviews. I have to say that I am not the best writer, but I do have some strengths. The way peer review helped me was with some of my major mistakes. Some of the major mistakes were my past tense words, words that I should stop mentioning, and which topics that I should rephrase. I have to say that without the peer reviews I would have not gotten the grade that I received. The group that I had helped me a lot. My group would give me suggestions and advice that I should follow. I remember when Jodie peer reviewed one of my papers she told me, that I shouldn’t use the word things in my paper. After she mentions that to me, I slowly stop using that word in my essays. As you can tell, I still use it but not as much though.

            Overall, this semester has been successful. I’ve learned how to write better college papers, and using the right words. I’ve noticed my strengths and weaknesses. Each time I write a paper, I am going to keep in mind what I’ve learned throughout all the essays and the peer reviews.



Watch Your Health

10 12 2007

Priscilla Carlson

English 1106

11/27/07

Persuasion

Watch Your Health

           

When having five dollars in my pocket where should I spend it? Should I spend it at the grocery store or McDonald’s? At a grocery store I can buy a loaf of bread, some deli meat, and this would last me a week. If I spend this at McDonalds I would just get one meal out of it. One meal only contains a Beverage, one container of fries, and a burger. But if I wanted to save this for another day it would go bad, or the food would get cold, and wouldn’t be good to eat anymore. I have to say that I would have to go for the grocery store. I say this because it would last a week, and probably would be healthier for me too. According to the movie Supersize Me, each day one in four Americans visit a fast food restaurant. This movie tells everyone about fast food. I think every college student should see this movie at least once. I want to help everyone to developed better healthy eating habits.

 

            Every college student has it hard to pay for food with little money that they have. I know at some fast food restaurants it’s not expensive, and can’t turn it down. I know having errands to do, and need to get something quickly to eat that fast food is the best way to do it. What if you ate fast food for a month? What will happen? According to the movie Morgan Spurlock did all of that. He ate fast food for thirty days. He ate McDonalds for breakfast, lunch, and dinner everyday. He had to eat everything on the menu at least once before the experiment was over. In this movie the doctors told him that this may be dangerous to his body. Before this movie began his health was above average. He was 6’2, 185 pounds, and below average of eleven percent of fat. During this experiment he seemed more depressed, and it was hard for him at one moment to finish a meal, but he did eat it. After the experiment was done his health was not the best. His cholesterol passed the 200 by a wide margin, he put on twenty-five pounds, his body fat increased from eleven percent to eighteen percent, and his liver was on a red alert also. It took him a year to go back to his previous weight, and it took him eight weeks for his liver to go back to normal.

            According to the movie, sixty percent of Americans are overweight or obese. One major cause that Americans deal with is Obesity. Obesity is also linked to hypertension, Coronary Heart Disease, Adult Onset Diabetes, Stroke, Gall Bladder Disease, and etc. This cause is leading to death in
America. I say this fact because Americans are not watching their health, until it’s too late to do something about it. The World of Health Organization has declared that obesity is a global epidemic. During the movie, they mention about diabetes. They mention how one of three children that are born in the year of 2000 will develop diabetes in their life time. Being a diabetic is hard for some people, but that’s how they have to live. The movie also mention that diabetes will cut to seventeen through twenty-seven years off your live. I know you probably think this is not true, but it is. This only follows someone if it’s hard to follow a food routine. If you’re that kind of person it would be hard for you to live life as a diabetic.

            According to the movie, McDonalds feeds more than forty-six million people a day, this is more than the entire population of
Spain. McDonalds represents forty-three percent of total
U.S. fast food market. One fact that I thought was interesting about McDonalds is that two beef patties, special sauce, lettuce, cheese, pickles, onions on a sesame seed bun contains two grams of fat. According to the Health Organization site, actually two grams of fat is not the only thing that goes in someone’s body when they eat fast food. What else goes in that person’s body is carbohydrate. Carbohydrate contains four calories, and a gram of protein contains four calories. A gram of fat contains nine calories and more than twice the amount of the other two.

            One bad part about eating healthy there is always a routine that every person follows. Some people like to look at a food label charts to look for some important ingredients that they like to follow. When looking at this chart they look for the calories, cholesterol, sugar, and grams of fat. Doing this takes time and adding it all together. Some people add all these ingredients together to see if they hit under 1000. If they do its healthy, if not they will not eat it. Eating healthy is hard work, but it does take time. Sometimes eating healthy cost a lot of money too. It all depends on what kind of healthy diet you would like to do. It all depends if a person wants to avoid dairy products, avoid meat, or avoid anything with sugar. All the healthy ways to eat does cost money, but that’s the price that everyone has to deal with. If I want to live a life to the fullest I would have to avoid fast food, find a way that I would like to eat, and keep it as a routine for life.

            I think our class should see this movie and discuss because everyone can relate to it in one way or another. I believe this because everyone eats and that’s how we live. I think some of our classmates could learn about some facts that we didn’t know of. I know that not everyone likes documentaries, but we could all learn from this. It could teach us how we can change out eating habits, and eat to a more healthy way. While eating a more healthy way, everyone can see some great effects. Everyone might be able to see that they’re not tired, more energy, and their emotions changed for the better. This is why I think our class should discuss this movie in class, so we can learn to keep our body’s healthy and live life to the healthiest way.