I can do it

Malika Bushey

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“I can do it”

9/27/07

 

I have always had a learning disability and when I was younger it was very hard for me.

 During school when I was younger people would take me to a special room where I would learn to read and write. I always will remember people calling me a case, and it made me really upset because I remember thinking that I am not a case. I am not a file. I am a human.  I remember telling people that I went to a special classroom when I would get taken out of class.

 Being called a case really brought down my self –esteem at that time. When high school rolled around it got even harder. I had a teacher telling me that I was stupid and that I was never going to pass high school let alone get into college. I am now graduated with a 3.4 grade point average in high school and now in my second year of college.

In high school I tried to keep my head up and not let people or what they said get to me. Words tend to stick in your brain which brought me down a lot in high school. That also pushed me to try to have more confidence in myself and to prove to people that I can do better. I wouldn’t let my learning disability get me down.

After that, I started getting good grades by pushing myself.  I proved to people that I wasn’t going to let it get me down. I worked really hard once I realized that I can do better. I knew that there was no way these teachers could label me and tell me if I was going to graduate or where I was going with my life.  It was time to take control of my own life. I turned my life around and I began to study hard. I began getting A’s instead of C’s. I started enjoying school instead of dreading and fearing what people might say or what rude comments teacher might make towards me.
After high school my confidence was way up there. I am now able to believe in myself and I know now that I can do it. No one has the right to take away my education.  I won’t let my learning disability get in the way or bring me down anymore.

 

2 Comments so far

  1. Steve on December 18th, 2007

    2 This is an important essay in your growth as a student. Your language here is strong and confident, and the result is a good comparison between the old and current Malikas. Your intro could be developed, but once it gets rolling, it’s a strong essay.

  2. Paul on December 20th, 2007

    “I won’t let my learning disability get in the way or bring me down anymore.” Wow, you have really overcome alot, Im glad for you that you overcame that teacher retarted remark. This was a strong essay, I hope you excell in college and get the job that you worked hard for.

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