Lucky

            Comp, some people don’t need to take this class because they are already good writers. I on the other hand did need this class. I was not the strongest of writers in fact I was a week writer. I learned may things skills to help my writing like giving examples, describe things, and I now put some of my own opinions into the papers I write.

            When I use to write I would never give examples. Like when I would write about the cabin. I would write about how much fun I would have, but not exactly tell why I had fun. Now when I write about how much fun I have at the cabin I give examples, Such as it is fun because my friends can spend all day out on the lake just cruising, doing bale outs off the pontoon, and playing football on the sand bar. Stuff like that. I like to use examples a lot more now because it almost puts a picture in your head when other people read my righting.

            I also didn’t describe thing either. Now how ever I describe fairly well I think. Like when I rote about the bar I work at I rote what the drunk guy did to get kicked out. He through the bottle like a pansy because he didn’t even brake the bottle, or when I described the bar tender and the waitresses revealing clothing as low cut shirts and short skirts.

            I have even started giving my opinion on things when I rite now. For example when I was telling about the bar tenders and waitresses wearing skimpy, revealing close my opinion was I thought it was a smart idea because they will get bigger tips. I also said I didn’t mind the view. I know there are more examples of that but I just can’t think of any right now.

            Whether you think you need the class or not you should take it because you will learn something you didn’t know or you will remember things that you have forgot to use like I have. I have learned to make my papers stronger by giving examples, describing things, and putting my opinion in my papers.