this thing working

I never knew that most editorials don’t really have endings. I think this will help the writing of this paper. also, the pyramid aplied to writing most important info at top, and least on down. I most likely would of just sprinkled random thoughts/ facts through-out my paper. I think i’m going to start this one way early so i can revise it plenty being that this is the first paper i’ve ever writin like this.