Ken, it looks like you were having some fun with these shots. The first one is your strongest compositionally. The second could use a little cropping off of the right side up to the edge of the pool table. -3pts. That will balance it. The third shot could have the pool table cropped out completely, because the guys in the back are the subject! -3pts.(Love it!)
In the fourth shot you cut off the guy’s head and the pool table isn’t that engaging, nor does it look off balance or distorted. -15pts.
The Fifth shot is also neither distorted, off balanced nor interesting.
Thanks for getting these posted. Come to Class!
Cherie
ham2 Said,
April 21, 2009 @ 9:34 am
Ken, it looks like you were having some fun with these shots. The first one is your strongest compositionally. The second could use a little cropping off of the right side up to the edge of the pool table. -3pts. That will balance it. The third shot could have the pool table cropped out completely, because the guys in the back are the subject! -3pts.(Love it!)
In the fourth shot you cut off the guy’s head and the pool table isn’t that engaging, nor does it look off balance or distorted. -15pts.
The Fifth shot is also neither distorted, off balanced nor interesting.
Thanks for getting these posted. Come to Class!
Cherie