Anthony, I love the bottle shot. The color, the light and the subject work very well. The second repetition is also a wonderful shot. The angle, the direction, the light and the way the eye wants to explore all of it. The third shot is a pattern. Look at the arrangement and how it repeats.
The indoor pattern of the wall would work in this composition if you eliminated the orange light and the window, or rotated it so that it’s upside down, or crop everything off except the six squares and part of the table. The flags are a stronger repetition, so you could trade it with the third pattern shot.
C.H.
ham2 Said,
March 10, 2009 @ 11:10 pm
Anthony, I love the bottle shot. The color, the light and the subject work very well. The second repetition is also a wonderful shot. The angle, the direction, the light and the way the eye wants to explore all of it. The third shot is a pattern. Look at the arrangement and how it repeats.
The indoor pattern of the wall would work in this composition if you eliminated the orange light and the window, or rotated it so that it’s upside down, or crop everything off except the six squares and part of the table. The flags are a stronger repetition, so you could trade it with the third pattern shot.
C.H.