This was a pretty well put together essay. Obviously,i t was a english teacher to who wrote it. However, the thesis is somewhat displaced. it does not show up in the beginning where you would expect it to. Also, i like the metaphores somwhat but, they do not seem relatable enough. I can not really see the relationship between m&m’s students. Sorry Steve, i will need some harder detail if you want me to take this to heart. catch in a couple minutes..