Posted on November 13th, 2007 at 7:08 pm by chswenso
I thought this story was going to be all about the old days. I started to read it and got to like the second page and I was totally wrong. It actually surprised me a little bit. It started talking about his sons and his friends fighting the war in Iraq and Afghanistan. I thought that this part was very interesting..
“I am now the father of a young man who has far more character than I ever had. I joined the Marines because I had to; he signed up after college because he felt he ought to. He volunteered for an elite unit and has served in both Afghanistan and Iraq. When I see images of Americans in the war zones, I think of my son and his friends, many of whom I have come to know and deeply respect. When I opened this newspaper yesterday and read the front-page headline ‘9 G.I.’s Killed,’ I didn’t think in abstractions. I thought very personally.”
I liked this because he is telling us exactly what he is feeling. He has had a huge change since he has been in the war. I didn’t expect him to come out and say that he was a father in this story. I just didn’t see it coming.
Thesis- “My attitude was the same as Dick Cheney’s: I was special, I had ‘other priorities.” Let other people do it.
I think that is the thesis because later on in the story he comes back to it. He gives it support.
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I also thought it was going to be different. I always have a hard time finding the thesis statement. I reread the story after reading your blog and I agree with you about what is the thesis statement. I thought the story was very poweful.
Comment by Valeri Vegar