I didn’t really like this story.  It had some great examples of cause and effect, but the story was to dull for me to fully read.  When i read that she was doing research on patients, I thought that it was a great set up for cause and effect.  When i got half way through the story i felt like throwing the book away.  The words she choose to use where way to high classed.  I hate it when someone has to use a stupid sounding word to explain something.  Just explain it in your way of telling it.  The word entrenched  Is not needed in this story.  That word makes it more complicating to read the whole story because it throws you off the subject.  I think as i read that word, how can this word make the story sound better.  Making sense in your story is what matters.  The subject was very boring too.  Unless i am going to become a doctor for that subject or do research on that subject then i would have enjoyed reading it.  I dont like reading stuff about people doing research on sexuality and eating disorders.  Good examples on what we are learning, but the story was horrible.  thought i was going to fall asleep.