I think this fits people in the perfect place.  The idea of M&M’s to portait people is great.  I wouldn’t agree with the penute being the best one to strive for an A mainly because those are my least favorite M&M’s.  I thought the story was complete in many ways.  It explains how getting work done and trying or not on the homework to get an A in the course is.  Also, the different kinds of M&M’s help define a little about what the writer means.